Tori
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Post by Tori on Jul 1, 2010 2:34:42 GMT -6
This was for homework a good time ago. It's not amazing but decent and my teacher thought I plagiarized this. d: Shall Love be esteemed while death be so cruel, Thy sun shall shine on a cold and dreary day? Take life lightly and be thought as a fool, Or death shall take on a great day of May; Light Chocolate skin as cozy as fire, Death is a shadow over my beating heart, to embrace thee was it really in dire Was there any truth in till death do us part Happiness dims on the fortunate A rose be beautiful before it wilts the choices we make leads us to our fate Another to replace the one that tilts; I shall embrace till the day I must go, Do not be afraid it is all a show.
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Post by Dancing Tiger on Jul 1, 2010 8:27:38 GMT -6
This is a wonderful piece of work. Not decent purhaps but because it is quite better than that. good job.
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Post by Tori on Jul 1, 2010 15:13:14 GMT -6
This is a wonderful piece of work. Not decent purhaps but because it is quite better than that. good job. Thank you very much. Haha. Poems take me so long to write now.
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Post by indigobliss on Jul 3, 2011 17:15:57 GMT -6
i agree - better than decent.. im very impressed
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